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Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this. This is generous of you, thinking of the welfare of others. Then, I hope you would be a millionaire.
- T. Beth
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If I were given a millionaire, I hope to help people of national merit.
>>> If I were given a million dollars, I hope to help people who gave merit to the nation.
>>> OR: If I were a millionaire, I hope to help people who contributed to the nation.
Although they are grandson of people who fight for national independence, they are poor than others due to using a lot of money for national independence.
>>> Although they are grandchildren of people who fought for national independence, they are poor than others due to using a lot of money for national independence.
I think people can exist after nation exist, so they who help nation\'s existence deserve support from others.
>>> I think people are able to exist after the nation existed, so they who helped with the nation\'s existence deserve support from others.
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