Homework

2019-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

학생이 쓴 원문

What factors may result in the breakdown of a good friendship? I think there are a lot of factors. I will explain about that. First, if you lie to a friend, that friendship will be done. Trust is important between friends. Therefore, you should not lie to your friends. Second, it is a little bit sensitive matter and It depends on personality. It is my opinion. I think that lending large money ruins friendship. I do not borrow money from my friends. Finally, you must do your best to have a good friendship.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Charlie!


I think this is one of your best homework, you\'ve ever done. It is because the grammar error is very minimal. Good job!


~Teacher Josephine~

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------



    

I think there are a lot of factors.

>> CORRECT


I will explain about that.

>> CORRECT


First, if you lie to a friend, that friendship will be done.

>> CORRECT


 Trust is important between friends.

>> CORRECT


Therefore, you should not lie to your friends.

>> CORRECT


Second, it is a little bit sensitive matter and It depends on personality.

>> Second, it is a bit sensitive matter and it depends on a person\'s personality.


It is my opinion.

>> This just my opinion.


 I think that lending large money ruins friendship.

>> I think lending big amount of money ruins friendship.


 I do not borrow money from my friends.

>>CORRECT


Finally, you must do your best to have a good friendship.

>> CORRECT


파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·