Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie!
I think this is one of your best homework, you\'ve ever done. It is because the grammar error is very minimal. Good job!
~Teacher Josephine~
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I think there are a lot of factors.
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I will explain about that.
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First, if you lie to a friend, that friendship will be done.
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Trust is important between friends.
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Therefore, you should not lie to your friends.
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Second, it is a little bit sensitive matter and It depends on personality.
>> Second, it is a bit sensitive matter and it depends on a person\'s personality.
It is my opinion.
>> This just my opinion.
I think that lending large money ruins friendship.
>> I think lending big amount of money ruins friendship.
I do not borrow money from my friends.
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Finally, you must do your best to have a good friendship.
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