homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think weather affects the way people feel? Why or why not?
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Summer is very hot because people are sensitive
There is a holiday in summer season because people are happy
Flowers and trees grow in the spring. so people get energized.
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Hello Charles!
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Summer is very hot because people are sensitive
>>> Summer season is very hot and people are being sensitive.
There is a holiday in summer season because people are happy
>>>People are happy on summer season because they can go on a holiday.
Flowers and trees grow in the spring. so people get energized.
>>>Flowers and trees grow in the spring so people get energized.
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