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Hello [이름]! thank you for this. I completely agree with you. I think some women are even more capable than some men.
- T. Beth
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Hello, Beth.
>>> CORRECT.
I did the homework late again.
>>> CORRECT.
These day, my husband has been busying at the office.
>>> These days, my husband has been buys at the office.
So I fall asleep yesterday when my daughter went to bed with me.
>>> So I fell asleep yesterday when my daughter went to bed with me.
See you later.
>>> CORRECT.
Do you believe that women are also capable or even better than men being in a higher position in the company?
Sure.
>>> CORRECT.
I believe that women capable than men.
>>> I believe that women are more capable than men.
I think women can think consider various aspects and carry out the work.
>>> I think women can think and consider various aspects and carry out the work.
Of course, I know that it depend on person.
>>> Of course, I know that it depends on person.
But If they understand that women have to do thing such as pregnant, maternity leave, the women can do wonderful effect when the women come back the work space.
>>> But if they understand that women have to do thing such as being pregnant, maternity leave, the women can do wonderful results when the women come back to the work space.
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