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A glorious Friday Ha [이름]!

I hope you\'re doing great. I\'m so happy to read your homework regarding your family. I can see how a protective and loving father you are.

Your children and wife must be lucky and blessed to have you as the head of the family. Anyhow, I wish your family to be surrounded by blessings and prosperity.

Have a marvelous weekend! Until then let\'s make our day the best it can be.

Learning is not attained by chance, it must be sought for with ardor and diligence. _ Abigail Adams

With deepest regards,
Teacher Lucy,

My family went to Spain for trip 4 years ago.

>>My family went to Spain for a trip 4 years ago.

My children was really young, son was 4 years old and daughter was only 22 months.

>>My children were really young. My son was 4 years old and my daughter was only 22 months.

My wife and I was worried about everything on the trip.

>>CORRECT!

>>My wife and I was worried about everything during the trip.

Because my daughter just started to walk by herself and my son also couldn\'t walk for a long time.

>>CORRECT!

>>Because our children need companions while walking.

So we needed to bring two stroller for them.

>>So we needed to bring two strollers for them.

You can imagine that it was really challenging to take a trip with babies.

>>CORRECT!

>>It requires a lot of patience in traveling with children.

However, I realized that the time in Spain was valuable, even though it was hard for me to take two children in the country which I haven\'t been before.

>>CORRECT!

>>However, I realized that the time in Spain was irreplaceable, even though it was hard to travel with my two children in a country I haven\'t been before.

I don\'t think physical punishment is the good way to discipline children.

>>CORRECT!

>>I don\'t agree that physical punishment is a good way to discipline children.

Many parents think that sparking is really effect way to stop child\'s abuse.

>>Many parents think that spanking is really an effective way to discipline children. 

However, punishment makes children defy their parents instead they realize what their problem is.

>>CORRECT!

>>Furthermore, punishment helps to let the children realize their fault.

Parents should explain what their fault is.

>>CORRECT!

>>After spanking a child, a parent should elaborate what their fault is.