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2019-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Attractive?? Attractive?? I think none of my family is attrractive...at least now. Well, but if I have to choose , I will choose my sister. But I will not write why U thke she is the most attractive person in my family. I will vomit while I write it. I will rather write about \'Why I can\'t like 3D person.\'. I think it will be fun.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

Your composition really made me laugh!

I can feel your emotion through the words.

I think that\'s what good writing is all about

Keep it up!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Attractive?? Attractive?? I think none of my family is attrractive...at least now.

>> I think there is no one in my family who is currently attractive.
Well, but if I have to choose , I will choose my sister.
>> Correct
But I will not write why U thke she is the most attractive person in my family.
>> However, I will not write why I think she\'s the most attractive person in my family.
I will vomit while I write it.
>> Correct
I will rather write about \'Why I can\'t like 3D person.\'.
>> I would rather write about the reasons why I can\'t like a person.
I think it will be fun.

>> Correct

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