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2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Nowadays, The Korean biggest problems are a sex scandal, between celebrity and police\'s adhesion, a drug scandal I think they deceived people and it is very scared things I hope that in the future these things would be not happend

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


I\'ve heard about this news too!

I hope so as well.

It\'s sad to see such things especially because a lot of people were looking up to these celebrities.


~~t. Ally



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Nowadays, The Korean biggest problems are a sex scandal, between celebrity and police\'s adhesion, a drug scandal

>> Nowadays, Korea\'s biggest problem is about the sex and drug scandals between a celebrity and the police. 


 I think they deceived people and it is very scared things

>> I think they deceived a lot of people and it is a very scary thing.


 I hope that in the future these things would be not happened

>> I hope that in the future, these things would not happen again.

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