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2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually eat with my family when I eat out. And there\'s no reason I think. Er, I am thinking of what I have to write in here. I am not good at thinking about what to write,so I will just write what my hand write. My dinner will be noodles. Hurray. I\'m hungry.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I think hunger got the best of you.^^

I\'m sure you can think of more things to write with the next topic.

Take note of the simple corrections so you won\'t repeat the same ones.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I usually eat with my family when I eat out.
>> I usually go with my family when I eat out.
And there\'s no reason I think.
>> I think there\'s no reason for that.
Er, I am thinking of what I have to write in here.
>> I\'m thinking of what to write next.
I am not good at thinking about what to write,so I will just write what my hand write.
>> I am not good at thinking of what to write,so I will just go with what my hand writes.
My dinner will be noodles. 

>> I will have noodles for dinner.
I\'m hungry.

>> Correct

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