Homework
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Hi, Charlie!
There are both advantages and disadvantages at shopping either online or at the malls. Nevertheless, using the most convenient for you will save you from a lot of troubles! haha
~Teacher Josephine~
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I prefer shopping at the malls but I sometimes use online.
>> CORRECT
When I buy something like clothes, I need to try it on.
>> CORRECT
Why I sometimes use online because It is cheaper than mall even it is same clothes.
>> The reason I sometimes buy online because it\'s cheaper that shopping at malls even the items are the same.
I used both things when I shop.
>> I use both things when I shop.
I compare price tag between mall and online.
>> I compare the price between at malls and in online shops.
However, I need to buy one thing at the mall. It is pants.
>> However, there\'s only one thing that I have to but at the mall, they are pants.
I need to try it on because of size.
>> I need to try them on fro me to know the size.
I can not try in on if I shop at the online.
>> I cannot try it on if I buy it online.
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