Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Beth.
This is the homework.
See you later. :)
> How do you think technology will change communication in the future?
When I was child, I just commuicate face to face.
But these day, I am almost using the chat and the phone. It’s compotable and easy.
I am seeing the advertisement nowdays about hologram display chat.
I think we will be able to use this technology in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. This sounds great! Hologram display chat would take communication to a next level.
- T. Beth
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When I was child, I just commuicate face to face.
>>> When I was a child, I just communicate face to face.
But these day, I am almost using the chat and the phone.
>>> CORRECT.
It’s compotable and easy.
>>> It\'s comfortable and easy.
I am seeing the advertisement nowdays about hologram display chat.
>>> CORRECT.
I think we will be able to use this technology in the future.
>>> CORRECT.
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