homework
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Make a sentence using the words below:
1. heavily emphasize
- Some parents in Korea used to heavily emphasize their children to study hard.
>> Some parents in Korea used to heavily emphasize the importance of studying hard to their children.
2. perfect match
- These days some parents became different with the old days. They want their children to find a job that is a perfect match with them.
>> Some parents aren\'t as strict as the ones in the old days. They just want their children to find a job that is a perfect match for them.
3. jobless
- I think how parents educate their child affects them and even it affects jobless rate in the country.
>> To my way of thinking, the way parents educate their child affects not only the latter but also the unemployment rate in the country.
4. a large number of
- A large number of graduated university students can\'t get a job because they have been studying only.
>> A large number of university graduates can\'t get a job because they have been studying only.
5. reduction
- When you study you should concern about reduction of stress.
>> When you study, you should also consider about the reduction of stress.
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