HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Lily!
Again, you did well in doing your homework.
You\'re good at essay writing. ^^
See you later.
Have a nice day.
_Teacher Dianne
What is your favorite book or movie, and why should people read or watch it?
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My favorite book is \'The little Prince\'. Because when I read this book, I feel like. (healing).
>> My favorite book is \'The Little Prince\'. Because when I read this book, I feel like I am healed.
There are many famous words in the book.
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>> or: There are a lot of common or familiar words in the book.
Most people probably read this book. When i was young, I read the book for the first time.
>> Most people probably have read this book. When I was young, I read the book for the first time.
At that time, I thought the book was a fairy tale. But when I became an adult, I read it. There were many meanings in the book.
>> At that time, I thought the book was a fairy tale. But when I became an adult, I read it and there were many meanings or interpretations in the book.
So I recommend that people read this book again.
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