Homework

2019-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Josephine

학생이 쓴 원문

Whose advice do you follow more, your parents’ or your friends’ advice? I follow my parents\' advice more than friends\'advice. They are older than me. It means that they have a lot of experience. In addition, they are my parents, so they know me better than anyone else even my best friends. They know my personality and hobbies. (etc..) Therefore, my parents can give me proper advice. However, I also listen to my friends\'advice. We know what the problem is because we are same age.

강사 첨삭




I follow my parents\' advice more than friends\'advice.

>> I follow my parents\' advice more than friends\' advice.


They are older than me.

>> CORRECT


It means that they have a lot of experience.

>> It means that they have a lot of experiences.


In addition, they are my parents, so they know me better than anyone else even my best friends.

>> CORRECT.


They know my personality and hobbies. (etc..)

>> They know my personality and hobbies, etc.


Therefore, my parents can give me proper advice.

>> CORRECT


However, I also listen to my friends\'advice.

>> However, I also listen to my friends\' advice.


We know what the problem is because we are same age.

>>  We know what the problem is because we are of the same age.


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