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I choice a high paying job because shopping is release my stressful and I like my coworkers. They are good peoples.
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I choice a high paying job because shopping is release my stressful and I like my coworkers.
>>> I choose a high paying job because I can have enough money to go shopping and it can release my stress with my co-workers.
They are good peoples.
>>>They are good people.
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