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2019-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hello, bath. Thank you for your feedback and advice. I sometimes make strange sentence. Honestly I am little bit timid person. If I make weird sentence, I am comfotable to you more and more. =) *Homework* What would you do if you need to discuss an important matter with someone but he/she is not available to speak with? I will wait when she availble to speak. But If she can’t speak long time, I will check to available other person instead of her.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. I guess that is the best option.

- T. Beth

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Thank you for your feedback and advice. 

>>> correct. 
I sometimes make strange sentence. 

>>> correct. 

>>> OR: I sometimes make strange sentences.
Honestly I am little bit timid person. 

>>>  Honestly, I am a little bit timid.

>>> OR: Honestly, I am a timid kind of person. 
If I make weird sentence, I am comfotable to you more and more. =)
>>> If I make weird sentences, I feel comfortable with you more and more. =)  
*Homework*
What would you do if you need to discuss an important matter with someone but he/she is not available to speak with? 
I will wait when she availble to speak.

>>> I will wait when she is available to speak with.

>>> OR: I will wait until she is available to speak with.   

But If she can’t speak long time, I will check to available other person instead of her.

>>>  But If she won\'t be available to speak with after a long time, I will look for another person to discuss it with instead of her.  

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