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The first thing I notice is fashion styles.
>> The first thing I notice is the person\'s fashion styles.
I think that it gives me their personality , so I could know who they are.
>> I think that it tells me their personality, so I can tell who they are.
When I meet someone, I usually look their fashion.
>> When I meet someone, I usually observe their fashion.
However, It is just my opinion, so It could be wrong.
>> However, it is just my opinion, so it could be wrong.
Further more, fashion styles are actually the most conspicuous.
>> Furthermore, fashion styles are actually the most conspicuous.
It makes first impression who they are.
>> First impression makes them who they are.
Again, It is my opinion, so it could be wrong.
>> Again, it is my opinion, so it could be wrong.
Mostly, it gives me impression who they are.
>> CORRECT.
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