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2019-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hello, Beth. I’m sorry for last Friday. I was busy. Your thinking is right. Did you spend good weekand? I spent great weekand. I went the outlet in other city with my family. My sister bought the clothes and we ate the meat a lot. And this is my homework. Is it better to talk with someone through phone or personally, especially for important matters? Why? => I like to talk with comfortable person such as my hausband, my mother and my sister. When I want to speak something, I usually use the text message. I prefer message to calling. :) But It isn’t in English. Hahahah Have a great day. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Yes, I had a great weekend. Although, I didn\'t do anything different.

- T. Beth

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I’m sorry for last Friday.

>>> OR: I’m sorry about last Friday.   

I was busy.

>>>   correct  

Your thinking is right. 

>>> OR: You were right.   
Did you spend good weekand?

>>> Did you spend good weekend?  
I spent great weekand.

>>>  I spent great weekend.  

I went the outlet in other city with my family. 

>>>   I went to an outlet in another city with my family. 
My sister bought the clothes and we ate the meat a lot.
>>> My sister bought the clothes and we ate a lot of meat.    
And this is my homework. 
Is it better to talk with someone through phone or personally, especially for important matters? Why?
=> I like to talk with comfortable person such as my hausband, my mother and my sister. 

>>>   correct      
 When I want to speak something, I usually use the text message.

>>>   OR: When I want to talk about something, I usually use the text message.

I prefer message to calling. :) 

>>>   correct         

But It isn’t in English.

>>> OR: But not in English.   
Have a great day. 

>>>   correct    

See you soon.

>>>   correct 

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