Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Yes, I had a great weekend. Although, I didn\'t do anything different.
- T. Beth
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I’m sorry for last Friday.
>>> OR: I’m sorry about last Friday.
I was busy.
>>> correct
Your thinking is right.
>>> OR: You were right.
Did you spend good weekand?
>>> Did you spend good weekend?
I spent great weekand.
>>> I spent great weekend.
I went the outlet in other city with my family.
>>> I went to an outlet in another city with my family.
My sister bought the clothes and we ate the meat a lot.
>>> My sister bought the clothes and we ate a lot of meat.
And this is my homework.
Is it better to talk with someone through phone or personally, especially for important matters? Why?
=> I like to talk with comfortable person such as my hausband, my mother and my sister.
>>> correct
When I want to speak something, I usually use the text message.
>>> OR: When I want to talk about something, I usually use the text message.
I prefer message to calling. :)
>>> correct
But It isn’t in English.
>>> OR: But not in English.
Have a great day.
>>> correct
See you soon.
>>> correct
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