Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]^^
How was you weekend? I hope it was a great one!
Here are the corrections for this homework and thank you for the great effort! :)
WRITING TASK: Do you usually exercise at the gym? If so, what equipment do you use? If not, where do you like to exercise?
I was exercise before, nowadays I did not exercise at the gym.
>>I used to work out, but I haven\'t been working out in the gym lately.
But I walk to bring my son at day care center. on average, Everyday I seems to walks for 30 minutes.
>>But I walk to get my son from the day care center. On average, I think I walk for 30 minutes every day.
If summer is coming, I will swim at the swimming poor.
>>During summer I go swimming, however my skill is so poor.
I like to swim best.
>>I like swimming the most.
I like swimming too! In fact, I will be visiting different beaches this coming month for my summer adventure.
I hope you could do that too with your family :)
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