homework

2019-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

1. she / a bag / carry - She isn\'t carrying a bag 2. Albert / squash / play - Albert isn\'t playing squash 3. we / in the mountains / walk - We aren\'t walking in the mountains 4. he / to school / go - He isn\'t going to school 5. the teacher / our homework / check - The teacher isn\'t checking our homework 6. we / our rooms / clean - We aren\'t cleaning our rooms 7. your father / a lorry / drive - Your father isn\'t driving a lorry 8. they / in the lake / swim - They aren\'t swimming in the lake 9. he / a blue shirt / wear - He isn\'t wearing a blue shirt 10. You / flowers / bring -You aren\'t bringing flowers Could you check this sentence? -My friend recommended my English name \' Lily\'. Lily means coruscate My friend thought that the name is similar to my image 2I want to have a boyfriend, but I don\'t like anyone. There is no good man 3Dental Hygienist assists dentist and teaches prevention of teeth way to patient. also they do a scaling.

강사 첨삭

Hi Lily! ^ ^ Thank you so much for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^

I guess you are familiar with present progressive. You got all the sentences correct. Just don\'t forget to put a period at the end of the sentence. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

 

1. she / a bag / carry
- She isn\'t carrying a bag

>>Correct
2. Albert / squash / play
- Albert isn\'t playing squash

>>Correct
3. we / in the mountains / walk
- We aren\'t walking in the mountains

>>Correct
4. he / to school / go
- He isn\'t going to school

>>Correct
5. the teacher / our homework / check
- The teacher isn\'t checking our homework

>>Correct
6. we / our rooms / clean
- We aren\'t cleaning our rooms

>>Correct
7. your father / a lorry / drive
- Your father isn\'t driving a lorry

>>Correct
8. they / in the lake / swim
- They aren\'t swimming in the lake

>>Correct
9. he / a blue shirt / wear
- He isn\'t wearing a blue shirt

>>Correct
10. You / flowers / bring
-You aren\'t bringing flowers

>>Correct

My friend recommended my English name \' Lily\'. Lily means coruscate

>>Correct
My friend thought that the name is similar to my image

>>Correct or

>>My friend thinks that the name describes my personality well.
I want to have a boyfriend, but I don\'t like anyone.

>>I want to have a boyfriend, but I can\'t find someone who suits my taste.

There is no good man.

>>I think there isn\'t any good man.
Dental Hygienist assists dentist and teaches prevention of teeth way to patient.

>>A dental hygienist assists dentists and teaches patients how to take care of their teeth the proper way.

also they do a scaling.

>>Dental hygienists also do scaling.

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