homework
학생이 쓴 원문
my home town is Icheon city.
There is a jisan resort, pine resort and konjiam resort.
I often go resort.
I enjoyed ski and snow board.
so this is my home town.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
my home town is Icheon city.
>>My home town is Incheon city.
There is a jisan resort, pine resort and konjiam resort.
>>CORRECT
I often go resort.
>> I often go to the resort.
I enjoyed ski and snow board.
>> I enjoyed skiing and snow boarding.
so this is my home town.
>> So this is my home town. (Capital letter - S)
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