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2019-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Do you like meeting new people? sure! i love to meet new people. whenever i met them , i was able to expand my horizon and learn lots of things from them. for example when i volunteered at the center for blind , it made me put myself in their\' position. so i tried to explain clearly using exact words like \'go to the right side in 10steps\'. that was a experience that made me a better person. that\' why i like meet new people!

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


Do you like meeting new people?

sure! i love to meet new people. whenever i met them , i was able to expand my horizon and learn lots of things from them.

>> Sure! I love meeting new people. Whenever I meet them, I can expand my horizon and learn numerous things.


 for example when i volunteered at the center for blind , it made me put myself in their\' position.

>> For instance, when I volunteered at the center for blind people, it made me put myself in their shoes.


so i tried to explain clearly using exact words like \'go to the right side in 10steps\'.

>> So I tried to explain clearly by using exact words like \'go to the right side in 10 steps\'.


that was a experience that made me a better person. that\' why i like meet new people!

>> That was an experience that made me a better person that\'s why I like meeting new people.

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