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Jean
Do you like meeting new people?
sure! i love to meet new people. whenever i met them , i was able to expand my horizon and learn lots of things from them.
>> Sure! I love meeting new people. Whenever I meet them, I can expand my horizon and learn numerous things.
for example when i volunteered at the center for blind , it made me put myself in their\' position.
>> For instance, when I volunteered at the center for blind people, it made me put myself in their shoes.
so i tried to explain clearly using exact words like \'go to the right side in 10steps\'.
>> So I tried to explain clearly by using exact words like \'go to the right side in 10 steps\'.
that was a experience that made me a better person. that\' why i like meet new people!
>> That was an experience that made me a better person that\'s why I like meeting new people.
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