homework!!

2019-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Make a sentence using the words below or make a paragraph by using the words below: 1. tragedy [noun] 2. tragic [adjective] 3. romantic comedy 4. ultimate 5. inspiration 1. one of dramas i was really into is \\\'mr.sunshine\\\', which is a tragedy. 2.personally , i don\\\'t like watching tragic dramas or movies. it makes me move to tears and sad. rather i prefer to watch comedy programs 3. romantic comedy is my favorite genre. i recommend you watch \\\'beauty inside\\\' korea drama. that was so nice 4. my ultimate goal is meeting various people from different countries as a flight attendant. this is the reason i study english 5. when i drew some pictures hard for my graduation exhibition last year,my inspiration of pictures was skies that i saw in newzealand and australia.

강사 첨삭

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Cheers!

Jean


Make a sentence using the words below or make a paragraph by using the words below:

1. tragedy [noun]
2. tragic [adjective]
3. romantic comedy
4. ultimate
5. inspiration


1. one of dramas i was really into is \\\'mr.sunshine\\\', which is a tragedy.

>> One of the dramas that I was really into was Mr. [Name], which is a tragedy.

 2.personally , i don\\\'t like watching tragic dramas or movies. it makes me move to tears and sad. rather i prefer to watch comedy programs

>> Personally , I don\'t like watching tragic dramas or movies because they move me to tears and make me sad. Rather, I prefer to watch comedy programs.


 3. romantic comedy is my favorite genre. i recommend you watch \\\'beauty inside\\\' korea drama. that was so nice

>> Romantic comedy is my favorite genre, I recommend that you watch the Korean drama Beauty Inside,  which has a nice story.

 4. my ultimate goal is meeting various people from different countries as a flight attendant. this is the reason i study english

>> My ultimate goal is to meet various people from different countries as a flight attendant, which is the reason why I\'m studying English.


 5. when i drew some pictures hard for my graduation exhibition last year,my inspiration of pictures was skies that i saw in newzealand and Australia.

>> When I worked hard at drawing some pictures for my graduation exhibition last year, my inspiration for my art was the different looks of the sky that I saw in New Zealand and Australia.

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