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2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. modify I modify the design of shoe lace as customer\'s request. The second sample is modified by customer\'s request. 2. regularly The latest information is regularly updated on every wednesday. I participate FILA\'s meeting for sharing newest designs once in a month regularly. 3. appreciate I appreciate for coming our office. I gave a rose to grandma for appreciate. If I put effort for learning english, I would appreciate in value at work. 4. acknowledge The customer will acknowledge a proposal that we suggested last week. I did acknowledge his big talent after saw his drawings 5. grateful I feel so grateful meeting you. I would be grateful for providing the datas I can\'t get easily.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. modify
I modify the design of shoe lace as customer\'s request. 

>> I have to modify the design of the shoe lace as per the customer\'s request. 
 

The second sample is modified by customer\'s request.
>> The second sample is modified according to the customer\'s request.  


 2. regularly
The latest information is regularly updated on every wednesday.

>> The latest information is regularly updated every Wednesday. 


 I participate FILA\'s meeting for sharing newest designs once in a month regularly.
>> I regularly participate at FILA\'s monthly meetings, which is for sharing the newest designs.


 3. appreciate
I appreciate for coming our office.

>> I appreciate your coming to our office. 


 I gave a rose to grandma for appreciate.

>> I gave a rose to grandma to show my appreciation. 


 If I put effort for learning english, I would appreciate in value at work.

>> If I put effort on learning English, my value at work would appreciate.

 4. acknowledge
The customer will acknowledge a proposal that we suggested last week.

>> correct


 I did acknowledge his big talent after saw his drawings

>> I did acknowledge his great or superior talent after I saw his drawings.

 5. grateful
I feel so grateful meeting you.

>> I feel so grateful that I met you. 

>> or: I feel so grateful to have met you. 


 I would be grateful for providing the datas I can\'t get easily.

>> I would be grateful to you if you provide the data that I can\'t get easily.

>> I\'m grateful to you for providing the data that I can\'t easily obtain.

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