homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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1. modify
I modify the design of shoe lace as customer\'s request.
>> I have to modify the design of the shoe lace as per the customer\'s request.
The second sample is modified by customer\'s request.
>> The second sample is modified according to the customer\'s request.
2. regularly
The latest information is regularly updated on every wednesday.
>> The latest information is regularly updated every Wednesday.
I participate FILA\'s meeting for sharing newest designs once in a month regularly.
>> I regularly participate at FILA\'s monthly meetings, which is for sharing the newest designs.
3. appreciate
I appreciate for coming our office.
>> I appreciate your coming to our office.
I gave a rose to grandma for appreciate.
>> I gave a rose to grandma to show my appreciation.
If I put effort for learning english, I would appreciate in value at work.
>> If I put effort on learning English, my value at work would appreciate.
4. acknowledge
The customer will acknowledge a proposal that we suggested last week.
>> correct
I did acknowledge his big talent after saw his drawings
>> I did acknowledge his great or superior talent after I saw his drawings.
5. grateful
I feel so grateful meeting you.
>> I feel so grateful that I met you.
>> or: I feel so grateful to have met you.
I would be grateful for providing the datas I can\'t get easily.
>> I would be grateful to you if you provide the data that I can\'t get easily.
>> I\'m grateful to you for providing the data that I can\'t easily obtain.
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