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2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t think wearing fashionable clothes is not important. That\'s why I were what I first see in my closet. I can\'t think about what to write in here. I lose my necktie today. I\'m doomed.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!
Be careful about the double negatives in the first sentence.
I really miss your writing.
I wish you would write more.
You did well today.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t think wearing fashionable clothes is not important.
>> I don\'t think wearing fashionable clothes is important.
That\'s why I were what I first see in my closet.
>> That\'s why i just wear whatever I see first in my closet.
I lose my necktie today. 
>> I lost my necktie today.
I\'m doomed.
>> Correct

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