homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> “Time is money.” Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I totally agree with the idiom. Some wisdom person said that people who have money buy time which is owned by people who doesn\'t have money. That is a salary. Yes, I am a salary man and I am poor. :(
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[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> “Time is money.” Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I totally agree with the idiom.
>> correct
Some wisdom person said that people who have money buy time which is owned by people who doesn\'t have money.
>> As wise people say, a person who has money buys time, which is owned by someone who is penniless.
That is a salary. Yes, I am a salary man and I am poor. :(
>> The money that those wealthy people give us is our salary. Yes, I am a salary man, and I am poor.
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