Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my highlight of the day is when I finish all the things what I have to do and do what I want to do.
I usually do Twitter, read webtoons, and watch animations.
I also do chatting with people in the internet. It\'s really fun.
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
Thank you for making an effort before the weekend.
You were very detailed in this composition.
Good job!
Enjoy your weekend!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think my highlight of the day is when I finish all the things what I have to do and do what I want to do.>> I think the highlight of my day is when I finish all the things that I have to do and do what I want to do.
I usually do Twitter, read webtoons, and watch animations.
>> I usually use Twitter, read web toon, and watch animation.
I also do chatting with people in the internet.
>> I also chat with people on the Internet.
It\'s really fun.
>> Correct
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