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2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Make a sentence using the words below: 1. indoor 2. beats me 3. cap 4. swimming cap 5. cautious 1. i enjoy doing indoor activities but the weather is too fine to be indoors. 2. i often have a problem that beats me. 3. some people argue that wearing a cap too often leads to hair loss 4, most of indoor swinning pools in korea require every user to wear a swimming cap 5. i tend to be careful and cautious before doing something,so sometimes i feel i am lacking in challenge spirit

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

Make a sentence using the words below:

1. indoor
2. beats me
3. cap
4. swimming cap
5. cautious

1. i enjoy doing indoor activities but the weather is too fine to be indoors.

>> correct [Just mind your pronoun I, which should always be capitalized.]

2. i often have a problem that beats me.

>> correct

>> or: It beats me how my friend always knows the answer to my teacher\'s questions.

3. some people argue that wearing a cap too often leads to hair loss

>> correct [Just remember to start your sentence with a capital letter and end it with a punctuation mark, i.e. full stop, question mark, or exclamation point. That\'s basic grammar.]

4, most of indoor swinning pools in korea require every user to wear a swimming cap

>> Most indoor swimming pools in Korea require every user to wear a swimming cap.

5. i tend to be careful and cautious before doing something,so sometimes i feel i am lacking in challenge spirit

>> I tend to be careful and cautious before doing something so I sometimes feel that I lack an adventurous spirit.

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