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> What would be a reason for you to choose to live in a rural area?
Because I don't want to live rural area, at opposite position, I write reasons hoping to live in one. First, they can breath clean air and feel natural circumstance. Second, there is a time to spare so there is stress hardly. Third, because roads are not complicated, rural area is silent and peaceful than city.
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Hello Jin! Thank you for this. Those are good points. But still, you don\'t wish to live in the rural area. :D
- T. Beth
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Because I don\'t want to live rural area, at opposite position, I write reasons hoping to live in one. >>> Because I don\'t want to live in the rural area, in an opposite position, I will write about reasons for hoping to live in one.
First, they can breath clean air and feel natural circumstance.
>>> First, they can breathe clean air and feel natural circumstances.
Second, there is a time to spare so there is stress hardly.
>>> Second, there is a time to spare so there is less stress.
>>> OR: Second, there is a time to spare so they hardly experience stress.
Third, because roads are not complicated, rural area is silent and peaceful than city.
>>> CORRECT
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