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2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> Does a person’s name influence the person they become? I think that a person\'s name definitely influences what the person becomes. We make most part of our personality when we are kids. For example, if my name was funny when I was a kid, my class mates would start bugging me with it.Thus, it would probably influence my personality to bad. Also, there has been a professional who analyzes people\'s name and predicts their future with it since the past in Korea.

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>> Does a person’s name influence the person they become?

I think that a person\'s name definitely influences what the person becomes.

>> correct


 We make most part of our personality when we are kids.

>> We develop our personality for the most part when we are kids.


 For example, if my name was funny when I was a kid, my class mates would start bugging me with it.

>> or: For instance, if my name was funny when I was a kid, my classmates would make fun of me.  


Thus, it would probably influence my personality to bad.

>> Thus, it would probably negatively influence my personality.


Also, there has been a professional who analyzes people\'s name and predicts their future with it since the past in Korea.

>> Furthermore, there have been professionals who have analyzed people\'s names and predicted their futures with it since the old days in Korea.

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