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> How do you usually feel about giving a presentation in front of a large audience?
Until I was middle school student, I didn't have a stage fright. But, while I got older, it has grown gradually and sometimes make me do nothing because of fear. In order to resolve it, I try to remove a stage fright using various methods. Lately, I usually this method that I announce presentation to acquaintance repeatedly. It is very useful while announcing presentation really.
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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. I guess it\'s normal to feel nervous when standing in front of an audience. What matters is you know how to control and deal with it.
- T. Beth
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Until I was middle school student, I didn\'t have a stage fright. >>> Until I was a middle school student, I didn\'t have a stage fright.
But, while I got older, it has grown gradually and sometimes make me do nothing because of fear.
>>> But as I got older, it has grown gradually and sometimes makes me do nothing because of fear.
In order to resolve it, I try to remove a stage fright using various methods.
>>> In order to resolve it, I try to overcome my stage fright using various methods.
Lately, I usually this method that I announce presentation to acquaintance repeatedly.
>>> Lately, I usually practice this method where I announce presentation to acquaintances repeatedly.
It is very useful while announcing presentation really.
>>> OR: It is really quite useful while announcing presentation.
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