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2019-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Q.Do you think fast food, soda and sweets should be sold in school cafeterias? Why? A.Yes, of course, because you can eat sugar in class, when you're not concentrating, sleepy, and hungry, during recess and lunchtime. Especially when I go to academy right after school, I feel hungry, tired, and dizzy. I think we should sell it to get rid of it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ruby!

I understand that you like eating sweets. ^^

It gives you energy in class so that you won\'t fall asleep.

Please drink lots of water after eating, okay?

~~t. Ally

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Yes, of course, because you can eat sugar in class, when you\'re not concentrating, sleepy, and hungry, during recess and lunchtime.

>> Yes, of course. Because you can eat candy in class so that you can concentrate and not be sleepy and hungry. You can also eat during recess and lunchtime.

Especially when I go to academy right after school, I feel hungry, tired, and dizzy.

>> CORRECT!

I think we should sell it to get rid of it.

>> CORRECT!

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