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I attended middle school reunions when I was high school student. Although we graduate middle school few years ago, we were changed a lot. Some friends who were good in study lose their interest on study so their score in high school was very low. On the other hand, some friends who have no interest on study did study hard like mad in order to enter good university. While I saw that changes, I thought that environment can affect people hard.
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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. It\'s really surprising sometimes when you see people after few years and notice the changes in their appearance and character. It only proves that people don\'t stay the same.
- T. Beth
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I attended middle school reunions when I was high school student. >>> I attended middle school reunions when I was a high school student.
Although we graduate middle school few years ago, we were changed a lot.
>>> Although we graduated middle school only a few years ago, we have changed a lot.
Some friends who were good in study lose their interest on study so their score in high school was very low.
>>> Some friends who were good in studying lost their interest in studying so their grades in high school were very low.
On the other hand, some friends who have no interest on study did study hard like mad in order to enter good university.
>>> On the other hand, some friends who had no interest in studying studied really hard like mad in order to enter a good university.
While I saw that changes, I thought that environment can affect people hard.
>>> When I saw those changes, I thought that the environment can greatly affect people.
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