homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]. I am cheering for you when you\'re playing golf! ^_^ Go for it!
~ T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
>>> Correct.
I was really happy to hear your voice again.
>>> Correct.
I was little bit busy last winter season.
>>> I was a little bit busy last winter season.
And I am still busy to learn how to play golf.
>>> Nowadays, I am busy practicing golf.
I have to go to golf range to get lesson after my work
>>> I have to go to the golf range to get a lesson after my work.
I learn and play golf for 2 hours.
>>> Correct.
>>> I learn and practice golf for hours.
And then as you konw, I go to swimming pool 3 times a week.
>>> As you may know already, I go to the swimming pool 3 times a week for a dip.
I am exhuasted every day. TT
>>> Correct.
>>> I feel exhausted every day.
I sleep like a dead man every nights.
>>> I sleep like the dead every night.
I realize once again that I lack of stamina.
>>> I realized once again my lack of stamina.
but I won\'t quit learning playing golf and I am going to do a perfact golf swing like Tiger woods someday .
>>> But I won\'t quit practicing and perfecting my golf form and sooner than not, I will play like Tiger Woods.
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