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2019-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene I was really happy to hear your voice again. I was little bit busy last winter season. And I am still busy to learn how to play golf. I have to go to golf range to get lesson after my work I learn and play golf for 2 hours. And then as you konw, I go to swimming pool 3 times a week. I am exhuasted every day TT I sleep like a dead man every nights. I realize once again that I lack of stamina. but I won't quit learning playing golf and I am going to do a perfact golf swing like Tiger woods someday .

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름].  I am cheering for you when you\'re playing golf! ^_^ Go for it!

~ T. Irene~

Hi Irene!

>>> Correct. 
 I was really happy to hear your voice again.

>>> Correct.  
 I was little bit busy last winter season.

>>>  I was a little bit busy last winter season.
 And I am still busy to learn how to play golf.

>>> Nowadays,  I am busy practicing golf.
 I have to go to golf range to get lesson after my work

>>>  I have to go to the golf range to get a lesson after my work. 
 I learn and play golf for 2 hours.

>>> Correct. 

>>> I learn and practice golf for hours.

And then as you konw, I go to swimming pool 3 times a week.

>>> As you may know already, I go to the swimming pool 3 times a week for a dip.
 I am exhuasted every day. TT

>>> Correct. 

>>> I feel exhausted every day.
 I sleep like a dead man every nights.

>>> I sleep like the dead every night.
 I realize once again that I lack of stamina.

>>> I realized once again my lack of stamina.
 but I won\'t quit learning playing golf and I am going to do a perfact golf swing like Tiger woods someday .

>>> But I won\'t quit practicing and perfecting my golf form and sooner than not, I will play like Tiger Woods.






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