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2019-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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#1 [handful of] When I did digging about organization , I found out that your organization help more than handful of people in scienctific knowledge communities. #2 [what impressed me the most] What impressed me the most about your organization was the fact that you provide a place for communication with other scientists. #3 [little digging] I did a little digging about your organization and I found out that one of your vision is inspirational The Korean Federation of Science & Technology Societies. #4 [ploughed on] I ploughed on a basic knowledge of architecture. My knowledge does not end in learning, but I want to help people with a better environment. #5 [enthusiasm] With my enthusiasm , I will actively try to communicate with various people at this opportunity. Thank you for your kindness. :)

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#1 [handful of]
When I did digging about organization , I found out that your organization help more than handful of people in scienctific knowledge communities.

>> When I did a bit of digging about your organization, I found out that it has helped more than a handful of people in the science community.

 #2 [what impressed me the most]
What impressed me the most about your organization was the fact that you provide a place for communication with other scientists.

>> correct

>> Or: What impressed me the most about your organization was the fact that you provide a platform for scientists and engineers.

 #3 [little digging]
I did a little digging about your organization and I found out that one of your vision is inspirational The Korean Federation of Science & Technology Societies.

>> I did a little digging about your organization and I found out that one of your visions is to provide inspiration to not only the science and technology sector but also the local community. 

 #4 [ploughed on]
I ploughed on a basic knowledge of architecture.
My knowledge does not end in learning, but I want to help people with a better environment.

>> I ploughed on regardless of difficulties just so I could expand my knowledge in architecture. 

>> My knowledge does not end in learning as I want to help people have a better environment.

 #5 [enthusiasm]
With my enthusiasm , I will actively try to communicate with various people at this opportunity.

>> With my enthusiasm, I will actively communicate with various people when given this opportunity.

 Thank you for your kindness. :)

>> You\'re always welcome!~~

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