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#1 [handful of]
When I did digging about organization , I found out that your organization help more than handful of people in scienctific knowledge communities.
>> When I did a bit of digging about your organization, I found out that it has helped more than a handful of people in the science community.
#2 [what impressed me the most]
What impressed me the most about your organization was the fact that you provide a place for communication with other scientists.
>> correct
>> Or: What impressed me the most about your organization was the fact that you provide a platform for scientists and engineers.
#3 [little digging]
I did a little digging about your organization and I found out that one of your vision is inspirational The Korean Federation of Science & Technology Societies.
>> I did a little digging about your organization and I found out that one of your visions is to provide inspiration to not only the science and technology sector but also the local community.
#4 [ploughed on]
I ploughed on a basic knowledge of architecture.
My knowledge does not end in learning, but I want to help people with a better environment.
>> I ploughed on regardless of difficulties just so I could expand my knowledge in architecture.
>> My knowledge does not end in learning as I want to help people have a better environment.
#5 [enthusiasm]
With my enthusiasm , I will actively try to communicate with various people at this opportunity.
>> With my enthusiasm, I will actively communicate with various people when given this opportunity.
Thank you for your kindness. :)
>> You\'re always welcome!~~
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