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2019-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Make a sentence using the words below: 1. crucial - Mr. [Name] made a goal and it was a crucial point to win the game for the team. 2. with a grain of salt - I always take news with a grain of salt because the goverment wants to cover up its mistakes. 3. fresh graduate - It\'s hard in here that the fresh graduates make a great result. 4. think outside the box - You should think outside of the box for making an attractive commercial. 5. greenhorn - Sometimes greenhorns can do a great job in their department.

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Make a sentence using the words below:

1. crucial
- Mr. [Name] made a goal and it was a crucial point to win the game for the team.

>> correct


 2. with a grain of salt
- I always take news with a grain of salt because the goverment wants to cover up its mistakes.

>> correct

 3. fresh graduate
- It\'s hard in here that the fresh graduates make a great result.

>> It\'s challenging for fresh graduates to bring a great result.

>> Note: Challenging is synonymous to difficult.


 4. think outside the box
- You should think outside of the box for making an attractive commercial.

>> You should think outside the box when making an attractive commercial.


 5. greenhorn
- Sometimes greenhorns can do a great job in their department.

>> or: There are times that greenhorns can deliver a good result in their department.

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