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~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: If you win the lottery, what is the first thing you would do?
 At first, I will count how much money I can get from the lottey after paid tax.( It will be 30% as I know)

 >>> At first, I will check on the actual money I will get from the lottery after a 30 % tax.
I will donate some money to a charity.

>>> Correct.
 And then I\'m going to think over What I can do with that money becauuse you didnot tell me how much money I get from the lottery win.

>>> And then, I\'m going to think over what I can do with that money because you did not tell me how much money I will win from the lottery.
 I will buy a building If the money is affordable.

 >>> I will buy a building if the money I won is enough.
I want to continue do my work although I win the lottery to be modest.

>>> To be modest, I will continue working even after winning the lottery.

I am so happy and exciting to imagine when I win the lottery with a big smile.

>>> I could imagine that I would be feeling happy and excited if I will win the lottery.