Homework~!

2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Make a sentence using the words below: 1. to inspire I would like to inspire contribution to the advancement of science and technology in korea. 2. encourage The organization encourages social outreach of scientist and engineers. 3. empower The mission of organization is to empower scientists and engineers in social by creating a good research environment where they can be immersed in their research 4. compassion I understand the meaning of the word, but I don\'t know how to make a sentence out of it 5. started to grow My interest in urban environment problem started to grow the first time I proceeded urban regeneration project during design camp.

강사 첨삭

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Make a sentence using the words below:
1. to inspire
I would like to inspire contribution to the advancement of science and technology in Korea.
>> correct

2. encourage
The organization encourages social outreach of scientist and engineers.
>> correct

3. empower
The mission of organization is to empower scientists and engineers in social by creating a good research environment where they can be immersed in their research
>> The mission of the organization is to empower scientists and engineers by creating a good research environment where they can be immersed in their research.

4. compassion
I understand the meaning of the word, but I don\'t know how to make a sentence out of it
>> The compassion that I have for the less fortunate is one reason that I want to be involved in this organization.

5. started to grow
My interest in urban environment problem started to grow the first time I proceeded urban regeneration project during design camp.

>> My interest in urban environment problem started to grow the first time I handled an urban regeneration project during our university design camp.

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