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2019-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I think, my own meaning of \"time is gold\" is the passed times are not back to us. Each individual person has 24 hours of one day. Additionally time is limited to us. So how to spend a time is important. I hope that you are spending worth time.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

This is a wonderful answer. ^^

Thank you so much for sharing this!

I hope you are spending your time\'s worth as well.

~~t. Ally

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I think, my own meaning of \"time is gold\" is the passed times are not back to us.

>> I think, my own meaning of \"time is gold\" is that when time has passed, we can never take it back.

Each individual person has 24 hours of one day.

>> Each person has 24 hours a day.

Additionally time is limited to us.

>> In addition, time is limited to us.

So how to spend a time is important.

>> So how we spend our time now is important.

I hope that you are spending worth time.

>> I hope that you are spending your time\'s worth.

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