homework
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ESSAY: What is the worst purchase you have ever made? What did you do with it? What do you always consider when shopping for items, the price or quality?
I like shopping as every woman does. Specially I like to buy cosmetics and clothes.
These days, I buy things from the internet market or TV shopping channels.Because it's easier and cheaper than open market. But sometimes, I failed and I am disappointed when it is delivered. So. Specilally, when I buy my clothes, I use open market more not to fail. I am a tall therefore I have to wear and check the size. hihi
I feel I am getting smart and to build my shopping skills in internet market.
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Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for sending your composition. I greatly appreciate it.
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: What is the worst purchase you have ever made? What did you do with it? What do you always consider when shopping for items, the price or quality? I like shopping as every woman does.
>>> Correct.
Specially I like to buy cosmetics and clothes.
>>> I, specially, like to buy cosmetics and clothes.
These days, I buy things from the internet market or TV shopping channels.
>>> Correct.
Because it\'s easier and cheaper than open market.
>>> Because it\'s easier and cheaper than in the open market.
But sometimes, I failed and I am disappointed when it is delivered.
>>> But sometimes, I fail and get disappointed once the goods are delivered.
So. Specilally, when I buy my clothes, I use open market more not to fail.
>>> So for my clothes, I now shop in the open markets so as not to get disappointed again.
I am a tall therefore I have to wear and check the size. hihi
>>> I am kinda tall so i always have to check the size.
I feel I am getting smart and to build my shopping skills in internet market.
I feel I am getting smart and to build my shopping skills in internet market.
>>> I feel I am getting smart in building a good shopping skill on the internet market.
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