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2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Make a sentence using the words below :1. common goal 2. Cross functional collaboration3. fiercely believe in 4. valuable team member 5. recover from the failure I have participated in the Chungnam University Design Camp and won the award. Our common goal is the revitalization of traditional markets. I fiercely believe in importance of communicate and coordination when i work as team. We worked according to the plan, but as we shared the same work, there used to be a clash of opinions. So we divided the work according to our individual abilities and enthusiasm, and as a result we were able to speed up and complete the project. I was in charge of panel work and presentation and it made me feel like a valuable team member in the team This plan makes valuable team member recover from the failure. Based on this experience, I\'m good at team work, and this experience will be useful for Cross functional collaboration.

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Make a sentence using the words below
:1. common goal 2. Cross functional collaboration3. fiercely believe in 4. valuable team member 5. recover from the failure

I have participated in the Chungnam University Design Camp and won the award.

>> I have participated in the Chungnam University Design Camp and won first place.


 Our common goal is the revitalization of traditional markets.

>> correct

 I fiercely believe in importance of communicate and coordination when i work as team. 

>> I fiercely believe in the importance of communication and coordination when I work with a team. 

 We worked according to the plan, but as we shared the same work, there used to be a clash of opinions. 

>>  We worked according to the plan, but as we shared the same work, having a clash of opinions couldn\'t be avoided.


 So we divided the work according to our individual abilities and enthusiasm, and as a result we were able to speed up and complete the project. 

>>  So we divided the work according to our individual abilities and enthusiasm, and as a result, we were able to speed up the process and complete the project. 


 I was in charge of panel work and presentation and it made me feel like a valuable team member in the team

>> I was in charge of panel work and presentation, and it made me feel like a valuable team member.

 This plan makes valuable team member recover from the failure.

>>  This plan makes a valuable team member recover from the failure.

 Based on this experience, I\'m good at team work, and this experience will be useful for Cross functional collaboration.

>> Based on this experience, I\'m good at team work, and this will be useful for Cross functional collaboration.

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