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Make a sentence using the words below
:1. common goal 2. Cross functional collaboration3. fiercely believe in 4. valuable team member 5. recover from the failure
I have participated in the Chungnam University Design Camp and won the award.
>> I have participated in the Chungnam University Design Camp and won first place.
Our common goal is the revitalization of traditional markets.
>> correct
I fiercely believe in importance of communicate and coordination when i work as team.
>> I fiercely believe in the importance of communication and coordination when I work with a team.
We worked according to the plan, but as we shared the same work, there used to be a clash of opinions.
>> We worked according to the plan, but as we shared the same work, having a clash of opinions couldn\'t be avoided.
So we divided the work according to our individual abilities and enthusiasm, and as a result we were able to speed up and complete the project.
>> So we divided the work according to our individual abilities and enthusiasm, and as a result, we were able to speed up the process and complete the project.
I was in charge of panel work and presentation and it made me feel like a valuable team member in the team
>> I was in charge of panel work and presentation, and it made me feel like a valuable team member.
This plan makes valuable team member recover from the failure.
>> This plan makes a valuable team member recover from the failure.
Based on this experience, I\'m good at team work, and this experience will be useful for Cross functional collaboration.
>> Based on this experience, I\'m good at team work, and this will be useful for Cross functional collaboration.
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