homework:)

2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Make a sentence using the words below: 1. huge believer of 2. team building 3. unfortunately 4. fly solo 5. Work with other people 1. I\'m a huge believer of an opportunity for me to grow further as an expert. 2. Since many of work is done as a team in society, I have built up my team experience with various contest activities. 3. Unfortunately, I\'ve never interacted with people in other fields, but I\'d like to get that opportunity by applying here. 4. Architecture is in fact a collection of various fields and it means that it is not flying solo. 5. So Architecture need to work with other people not only the same profession but also other various field. We don\'t have much time left. I always appreciate your kindness. Thank you :) I\'ll try harder for the rest of my class.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

>> I\'m a huge believer in grabbing an opportunity for me to grow further as an expert.

2. Since many of work is done as a team in society, I have built up my team experience with various contest activities.

>> Since a great deal of work is done as a team in society, I have built up my team experience through joining various contests or activities.

3. Unfortunately, I\'ve never interacted with people in other fields, but I\'d like to get that opportunity by applying here.

>> correct

4. Architecture is in fact a collection of various fields and it means that it is not flying solo.

>> Architecture is in fact a collection of various fields and this means that this is not a area where one can fly solo.

5. So Architecture need to work with other people not only the same profession but also other various field.

>> So in the field of Architecture, one needs to work with other people not only from the same profession but also from other various fields.

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