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2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. fully support My boss fully support me to work well. My parents have fully supported with heart me to be a strong person in anywhere. 2. on the report I have to rum summit the 20SS trend on the report after attend a seminar in this coming friday. 3. official or formal I will ask for approval of the new design to a person in charge who has a master license. 4. to provide Could you wait for the production of new design until i provide a correct bar-code? 5.I\'m calling to know if I\'m calling to know if you provide a prototype sample until keycount meeting this coming friday?

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1. fully support
My boss fully support me to work well.

>> My boss fully supports me to work well.


 My parents have fully supported with heart  me to be a strong person in anywhere.

>> My parents have fully supported with, which made me become into who I am today.


 2. on the report
I have to rum summit the 20SS trend on the report after attend a seminar in this coming
friday.

>> I have to include the 20SS trend on the report after attending a seminar this coming Friday. [I\'m not quite sure what \"rum summit\' means. I edited the sentence based on what I understood.]

 3. official or formal
I will ask for approval of the new design to a person in charge who has a master license.
>> I will ask for an approval of the new design from the person in charge who has a master license. 


 4. to provide
Could you wait for the production of new design until i provide a correct bar-code?
>> Could you wait for the production of the new design until I provide a correct bar-code?

 5.I\'m calling to know if
I\'m calling to know if you provide a prototype sample until keycount meeting this coming friday?

>> I\'m calling to know if you provide a prototype sample before the key account meeting this coming Friday. [What does keycount mean? I\'m guessing it\'s a design lingo.]

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