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1. not only, but also 2. gathered 3. as a graduating student 4. I may not have much experience 5. beyond
#1 I not only worked on the urban regeneration project at school, but also participated in the building contest as a team project.
>> correct
#2 When I work as a team, I try to gather opinions so that I don\'t miss any of them.
>> When I work with a team, I try to gather opinions so that I don\'t miss any of them.
#3,4,5
As a graduating student, I may not have much experience about Practical experience but through various external experience, I have developed planning skills and creativity beyond the ability to identify and cope with the situation and problems of my work.
>>As a graduating student, I may not have much practical experience but through various external experience, I have developed planning skills and creativity beyond the ability to identify and cope with the situation and problems in my work.
When I applied for this program, I chose the United States out of four countries. So I am expected to ask why I chose this country.I want you to read it and give me some feedback.
>> When I applied to this program, I chose the United States out of the four countries so I\'m expecting the interviewer to ask me why I chose this country. I want you to read it and give me some feedback.
We have been learning English for a long time, but we have rarely experienced a country that uses it in person. So I want to go there and experience language and culture exchanges.
>> We have been learning English for a long time, but we have rarely experienced living in an English-speaking country. So I want to go there and experience the language and culture exchange.
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