Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever helped a neighbor?
I had been to help my neighbor last weekend. It was care to neighbor\'s baby with together. I am close to some related my apartment\' neighbor. Taking care of baby together is pass very fast the time. And I think that care of baby alone hard more than together. So together with neighbor is something to happy.
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Hi [이름]!
I love the effort you put in your composition!
I see that you\'re trying to improve how you construct your sentences.
I hope you keep practicing.
It will be very good for you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I had been to help my neighbor last weekend. >> I helped my neighbor last weekend.
It was care to neighbor\'s baby with together.
>> We took care of our babies together.
I am close to some related my apartment\' neighbor.
>> I am close to my neighbor\'s relative.
Taking care of baby together is pass very fast the time.
>> Taking care of our babies together helps to pass the time.
And I think that care of baby alone hard more than together.
>> It\'s more difficult to take care of a baby alone than doing it with someone else.
So together with neighbor is something to happy.
>> Being with my neighbor makes me so happy.
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