homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Are you okay?! I don\'t know whether to laugh or worry. I would like to scold you but honestly, I would also do anything to look good. Ha ha ha. Anyway, I suggest you go back to the doctor. There might be something wrong or maybe he could do something about that. Don\'t waste the time. You have to go as soon as possible. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!
>>> Correct.
It\'s very sunny in here.
>>> Correct.
I am not busy this morning so I tell you funny stroy what happens to me
>>> I am not busy this morning so I will tell you a funny story of what happened to me.
Igot botox injections to my jaw 3 weeks ago.
>>> I got some Botox injections on my jaw 3 weeks ago.
About a frist week nothihng happened to my face.
>>> For the first week after, I didn\'t feel any changes.
But, My lips were going to be crooked(?).
>>> Then my lips started to look crooked (distorted/out of line).
whenever I smile or move my mouth, I look funny because of my cooked lips.
>>> Whenever I smile or move my mouth, my face looks funny because of my crooked lips.
I am still funny looking TT
>>> Until now, it looks that way.
As I told you, My friends from Indonesia will come next week.
>>> As I told you before, my friends from Indonesia will be coming next week.
We haven\'t met for 8 years, I really want to show them my good looking.
>>> We haven\'t met for 8 years and I really want to show how good I look.
what I have to do?
>>> What should I do?
I admit my greed which I wanted to be little bit younger for meeting my friends.
>>> I admit my vanity to look a little bit younger when I meet my friends.
Ah~~ I sigh whenever I look my face.
>>> I sigh whenever I look at my face.
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