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2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> Which countries do you think take in the most immigrants? Well, I think that the United States used to be the most immigrants country in the past. Since Trump had become a president of the United State, It turned hard to immigrate to there. The other English-speaking countries turned to be hard too along the USA. However, some European countries still keep open their door which means that the most immigrants country could be one of the European countries.

강사 첨삭

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Jean~~

>> Well, I think the United States used to be the country that has the most immigrants.

Since Trump had become a president of the United State, It turned hard to immigrate to there.

>> Since Trump became the president of the said country, it turned difficult to immigrate there.

The other English-speaking countries turned to be hard too along the USA.

>> Other English-speaking countries have followed the USA\'s example.

However, some European countries still keep open their door which means that the most immigrants country could be one of the European countries.

>> However, some European countries still keep their doors open, which means that the country that takes in the most immigrants could be in Europe.

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