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학생이 쓴 원문
My dream is to become a person who can do whatever I want to.
That means I want to make a lot of money.
My dream is to be rich.
Now I can\'t think about what to write in here.
I don\'t want to study. I want to play with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I think that everybody wants to be rich.
You always work hard in your studies.
I think you have a bright future ahead of you.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My dream is to become a person who can do whatever I want to.>> My dream is to become a person who can do whatever she wants.
That means I want to make a lot of money.
>> Correct
My dream is to be rich.
>> Correct
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