homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you so much for your greeting. I hope I will enjoy the time alone. ^_^ Actually, I was going around some department store yesterday and I saw a portable and handy facial massager. It was cheap so I bought one. I was excited last night to use it however, I kinda forgot to buy batteries. So, yes, I will be pampering myself this weekend. ^_^ Thank you for your suggestions.
~ T. Irene ~
Irene!! Don\'t be sad because you have to be alone in this holidays.
>>> Irene!! Don\'t be sad because you have to be alone in these holidays.
How about doing these things alone?
>>> Correct.
1. Watching movie with snacks and beer.
>>> Watching a movie with snacks and a can of beer.
2. Having time to your body and beauty
>>> Taking time to care for your beautiful face and sexy body. ( I agree with this! Hahaha)
- Bathing and scrubbing body, Treatment hair, Massage your face and putting on Mask sheets something like that
>>> Do some body scrub while taking a bath; have a hair treatment; massage your face and put on mask sheets.
3, Arranging your clothes
>>> Correct.
- Throw away clothes you don\'t wear.
>>> Correct. (I will! Thank you! ^_^)
4. Arranging your refrigerator.
>>> Correct.
5. Read a short story books with a cup of coffee
>>> Read a short story book while drinking a cup of coffee. (This is one of the things I really do a lot. ^_^)
6. Go for a walk with your dogs
>>> Correct. (Hmmm. I don\'t like the dogs. ^_^)
>>> Walk your dogs.
7. Cook or buy delicous food for you.
>>> Correct.
>>> Cook or buy some delicious food.
I do those things when I am at home.
>>> Correct. (What a happy life you live! ^_^)
You will find how fast time goes.
>>> Correct.
Have a nice weekend!!!
>>> Correct.
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