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2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Irnen!! Don't be sad because you have to be alone in this holidays. How about doing these things alone? 1. Watching movie with snaks and beer. 2. Having time to your body and beauty - Bathing and scrubbing body, Treatment hair, Massage your face and putting on Mask sheets something like that 3, Arranging your clothes - Throw away clothes you don't wear 4. Arranging your refrigerator 5. Read a short story books with a cup of coffee 6. Go for a walk with your dogs 7. Cook or buy delicous food for you. I do those things when I am at home. You will find how fast time goes. Have a nice weekend!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!  Thank you so much for your greeting. I hope I will enjoy the time alone. ^_^ Actually, I was going around some department store yesterday and I saw a portable and handy facial massager. It was cheap so I bought one. I was excited last night to use it however, I kinda forgot to buy batteries. So, yes, I will be pampering myself this weekend. ^_^ Thank you for your suggestions.

~ T. Irene ~

Irene!!  Don\'t be sad because you have to be alone in this holidays.

>>> Irene!!  Don\'t be sad because you have to be alone in these holidays.
 How about doing these things alone?
>>> Correct.
1. Watching movie with snacks and beer.

>>>  Watching a movie with snacks and a can of beer.
 2. Having time to your body and beauty

>>>  Taking time to care for your beautiful face and sexy body.  ( I agree with this! Hahaha)
   - Bathing and scrubbing body, Treatment hair, Massage your face and putting on Mask sheets something like that

>>>  Do some body scrub while taking a bath; have a hair treatment; massage your face and put on mask sheets.
 3, Arranging your clothes

>>> Correct.
  - Throw away clothes you don\'t wear.

>>> Correct. (I will! Thank you! ^_^)
 4. Arranging your refrigerator.

>>> Correct.
 5. Read a short story books with a cup of coffee

>>>  Read a short story book while drinking a cup of coffee.   (This is one of the things I really do a lot. ^_^)
 6. Go for a walk with your dogs

>>> Correct. (Hmmm. I don\'t like the dogs. ^_^)

>>> Walk your dogs.
 7. Cook or buy delicous food for you.
>>> Correct.

>>> Cook or buy some delicious food.   
I do those things when I am at home.

>>> Correct. (What a happy life you live! ^_^)

You will find how fast time goes.

>>> Correct.

Have a nice weekend!!!

>>> Correct.




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