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2019-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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What is your dream for the future? I have dream of 3 things. First I want to talk English with my son. Second I want to work for global company. All about this is related to English. Last I wonder If I can English well but I want to speak English well.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Your dreams are very commendable.
I know you can achieve them.
Start with the proper prepositions.
You need to familiarize yourself with them.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have dream of 3 things.
>> I dream of 3 things.
First I want to talk English with my son.
>> First, I want to be able to speak in English with my son.
Second I want to work for global company. 
>> Second I want to work for a global company. 
All about this is related to English. 
>> All of these are related to English.
Last I wonder If I can English well but I want to speak English well.
>> I\'m really wondering if I could speak in English well but I do want to. 

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