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2019-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hello, Beth. Did you have good weekend? I went to my relative’s wedding and I met my father after a long time. I had a great time. See hou tomorrow. Have you ever attended any seminar or conference on behalf of a colleague? Tell me about it. I had this experience. My colleague registed the seminar. But something happened to him. So I attended the seminar behalf of him. I learned the new impormation and technology. I had a good chance.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for this. My weekend was great. I had relative visit my city and I spend time with my nephew. He is 7 months old. I also did a lot of chores like washing bed linens and blankets, cleaning my room and waxing the floor. It was a productive weekend for me. I hope your weekend was great as well.

- T. Beth
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Hello, Beth.

>>> correct
Did you have good weekend?

>>> correct

I went to my relative’s wedding and I met my father after a long time.

>>> correct

I had a great time.

>>> correct
See hou tomorrow.

>>> See you tomorrow.

Have you ever attended any seminar or conference on behalf of a colleague? Tell me about it.

I had this experience.

>>> correct

My colleague registed the seminar.

>>> My colleague registered for the seminar.

But something happened to him.

>>> correct

So I attended the seminar behalf of him.

>>> So I attended the seminar in behalf of him.
I learned the new impormation and technology.

>>> I learned about new information and technology.

I had a good chance.

>>> correct

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